tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post5855733305807914906..comments2024-01-29T10:33:48.188+05:30Comments on A Corner Of My World: BrokenAparnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05527786215758008556noreply@blogger.comBlogger74125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-60764226474466081292009-09-19T18:21:59.067+05:302009-09-19T18:21:59.067+05:30That is a nice fiction. I am glad you cheated!!That is a nice fiction. I am glad you cheated!!Prashansahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00330192263223672707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-28101711965705292622009-09-16T00:42:58.874+05:302009-09-16T00:42:58.874+05:30I don’t know what exactly zillion asked you but th...I don’t know what exactly zillion asked you but this was amazing and the way it unfolded was so unpredictable.<br /><br />Great job done :)<br /><br />Should i also try this one zillion? hmmm let me see..ekta khetanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13253258697971928171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-5125966403019164792009-09-14T19:38:58.916+05:302009-09-14T19:38:58.916+05:30Hi everyone, sorry for replying so late to all of ...Hi everyone, sorry for replying so late to all of you. I have been very busy the last few days.<br /><br /> Thanks Sohini, coming from you it meant a great deal. I hope you will also start writing soon. Though I know you are extremely busy.<br /><br />Thanks Insignia, I am glad you liked the story, welcome to my blog.<br /><br />Thanks Deep. By broken, I meant the mind. Priya's mind was completely shattered and the line between her reality and imaginery world had blurred.<br /><br />Thanks Swatantra, I am so happy.<br /><br />Thanks Guruprasad, I am seeing you here after a long time. I am glad you liked the story.<br /><br />Thanks Ramesh.<br /><br />Hi Einstein. I think my mind was wandering, hence the confusion in the story.<br /> <br />Hi,Mystic Margarita, glad you liked the story. <br /><br />Hi ZB, yeh dil always maange more.But no matter how many comments I get, I always miss the regulars. But yes I am happy with the response. So when do we get the result?<br /><br />Sakshi, what will it take to tear away SJ from Zulfie's arms?<br /><br />Thanks Deeps, this was a part of a competion. That is why Sujata's and my story had a lot of common things.<br /><br />Thanks Onkar, I am glad you liked the story.<br /><br />Thanks Diwakar, welcome to my space.<br /><br />Hi Sandhya, I am so glad you liked the story. I was not sure of my fiction writing abilities. I have never written a short story earlier. Hope I was able to describe Priya's bizarre world through my writing.Aparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05527786215758008556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-12691421312988049032009-09-14T13:08:30.149+05:302009-09-14T13:08:30.149+05:30I am a bit late, Aparna. Thank god, I didn't ...I am a bit late, Aparna. Thank god, I didn't miss it. This is too good. I believe when you say that you wrote it. Your posts are very narrative. Your writing is excellent. This is THE best, Aparna. Keep it up. Dil maange more!Sandhyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478831923010850316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-62326588354096124852009-09-13T19:56:16.382+05:302009-09-13T19:56:16.382+05:30It was a captivating story.
had a good time with ...It was a captivating story. <br />had a good time with it<br />nice piece of fiction :)Diwakar Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00147833883439575794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-12382781918877865162009-09-13T16:16:54.928+05:302009-09-13T16:16:54.928+05:30Excellent. The piece reveals another side of you.Excellent. The piece reveals another side of you.Onkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15549012098621516316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-3132235711533668852009-09-12T22:49:08.405+05:302009-09-12T22:49:08.405+05:30that was superb piece of writing...is it connected...that was superb piece of writing...is it connected to Sujata's version,if I may ask?I somehow felt so.But you gave a different twist altogether which was appealing too.<br /><br />This is your first attempt at fiction...amazing!keep writing,Aparna!Deepshttp://deepsspeakingup.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-90991163625621375392009-09-12T02:54:12.134+05:302009-09-12T02:54:12.134+05:30I have conveyed the sad news to SJ that bcoz she i...I have conveyed the sad news to SJ that bcoz she is not visiting your place you have decided to only take me as your Shishya to part with your writing skills :). Hope that threat will lure her here from Zulfi's arms :)Sakshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681787664386745577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-17706295247814389232009-09-11T02:09:18.634+05:302009-09-11T02:09:18.634+05:30GOsh....so many comments...and you still aint plea...GOsh....so many comments...and you still aint pleased with the numbers? I would kill for anything close to half of this. Nobody likes ZB...SOB...EEEEEEEWWWWWWW.....but frankly do you still care for the numbers...For me i am more than happy if Aparna, Sujata, Abstract, Gay3, Jyothi, Anju, Panorama, Neha comment on my post....rest is all a bonus....TC:))ZBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02447730465256670305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-40325120244369921752009-09-11T01:42:30.609+05:302009-09-11T01:42:30.609+05:30Loved it! Very gripping! Hope you continue to writ...Loved it! Very gripping! Hope you continue to write short stories - you have a gift for characterization.<br /><br />Haven't been very active in the blogosphere lately, will catch up on the posts I missed.Mystic Margaritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02615330145873480073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-80627364591579481002009-09-11T00:06:55.548+05:302009-09-11T00:06:55.548+05:30ok. i got confused. Had to read it twice to compre...ok. i got confused. Had to read it twice to comprehend it.... The description of the characters was vivid, but the story thread was winding... "ek kahani" types... I used to like the serial, but some of the episodes confused me... this could have been one of those episodes...eye-in-sty-inhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03492754780997045079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-46982761502749898752009-09-10T22:14:45.407+05:302009-09-10T22:14:45.407+05:30thanksssssssssss dearrr...thanksssssssssss dearrr...R. Rameshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00314470449340373184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-24813717643379372122009-09-10T17:16:06.073+05:302009-09-10T17:16:06.073+05:30i don't care if you broke the rules that were ...i don't care if you broke the rules that were set for you for writing this story (rules are meant to be broken, right? :) )<br /><br />i just loved this one!<br /><br />now you have a bigger problem on hand! you have to keep matching this and outdoing yourself everytime! :)Guruprasadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14542501064006901857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-84150153226032846882009-09-10T16:50:22.815+05:302009-09-10T16:50:22.815+05:30This is superb!! Whatever attempt is it. This is a...This is superb!! Whatever attempt is it. This is amazing!!Swatantrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464802388614327065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-92070698862830791122009-09-10T14:04:33.797+05:302009-09-10T14:04:33.797+05:30thats true .. love heals as much as it hurts .. do...thats true .. love heals as much as it hurts .. dono which order is the best..!!<br /><br /><br />vooo ... you just go lala .. when it comes to poring down your ideas to the blog post ha?<br />great...<br />didnt get though what's broken... maybe i got lost in the flow..deepshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15296902414799985603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-34715938539190835232009-09-10T13:27:29.933+05:302009-09-10T13:27:29.933+05:30Fantabulous!!!
I forgot myself and got engrossed ...Fantabulous!!!<br /><br />I forgot myself and got engrossed in your narration.<br /><br />Excellent!! Waiting for more of your fictionsInsigniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09819054091062923489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-67220974499401882402009-09-10T12:57:43.813+05:302009-09-10T12:57:43.813+05:30Hey Aparna,
Been meaning to follow your blog but ...Hey Aparna,<br /><br />Been meaning to follow your blog but couldnt. Just started reading and realized what am missing out on...Fantastic work man!!! Really good work. Keep it up and am definitely follow your writing. Cheers. Must take an autograph during next Mumbai trip!Sohini Rajpalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15002365070684734360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-6798263782092532332009-09-10T10:45:04.735+05:302009-09-10T10:45:04.735+05:30Ramesh, thanks, but did you read the story?
Sharm...Ramesh, thanks, but did you read the story?<br /><br />Sharmila, fiction is not my cup of tea. I think this will be my one and only.<br /><br />Sai charan, long time no see. Where were you? Glad you liked the story.<br /><br />Smita, thanks. Meant a lot coming from you.<br /><br />Sakshi, Too much BBJ is not good for the brain, you should know better. As long as you read the story, i am fine. I forgive you for coming late. But tell SJ I am miffed. She has not only stopped blogging, she has also stopped reading.Hmph. <br /><br />Sanjay Vyas, thank you from the bottom of my heart.I am so glad you liked the story. A lot of people did get confused I guess.<br />Happy Durga Puja to you also.<br /><br />Toshali, thanks dear.<br /><br />Abstract Scientist, thank you. I tried to make this a little different as a lot of people were writing on the same line.I am happy you liked my version.<br /><br />Nona, how well you know me :DAparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05527786215758008556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-81087091926860171072009-09-10T07:36:31.665+05:302009-09-10T07:36:31.665+05:30Having read Sujata's story first, I guessed wh...Having read Sujata's story first, I guessed what would be the guidelines for writing the short story. So, I was expecting Arun to die and Priya to live with the in-laws. So, here I'm ready for a smooth ride and then you threw me off balance.<br /><br />I should have guessed! You don't stick to rules. :)Nonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13892851938328826870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-71939087703887059422009-09-10T07:13:02.990+05:302009-09-10T07:13:02.990+05:30OMG, I have been following all the versions of thi...OMG, I have been following all the versions of this story. I loved yours. The perspective was different which has been treated rather strongly. One thing is for sure, I am irritated with ZB for such a sad initial story line, shall request him for a humorous one nxt. Cheers to life. Twas a gr8 debut.The Unsure Ascetichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10196315126703878175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-55437010403138518132009-09-10T00:03:08.957+05:302009-09-10T00:03:08.957+05:30oh well nicely writtenoh well nicely writtentoshalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11122503758520732236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-26812995688813272312009-09-09T22:51:13.884+05:302009-09-09T22:51:13.884+05:30Had you not informed me about the story i might ha...Had you not informed me about the story i might have missed it as i was not able to use the net in these days.<br />one of the finest stories i have read in recent times. a woman stuck in a time frame, trying desperately to get free,ultimately accepting it as destiny.great durga puja gift to us.i hope you keep on writing stories on such issues and characters.every year,<br />we on radio relay special programme 'mahalaya'a day before partipada.happy 'only days ahead' durga puja.sanjay vyashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12907579198332052765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-34521741433509375422009-09-09T21:30:20.023+05:302009-09-09T21:30:20.023+05:30Btw I came quiet a few times on your blog but it w...Btw I came quiet a few times on your blog but it was not loading up and today i got lucky:)Sakshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681787664386745577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-68195097597714184682009-09-09T21:29:36.735+05:302009-09-09T21:29:36.735+05:30Aww that's your first attempt *fainted*. It wa...Aww that's your first attempt *fainted*. It was a gripping story and almost made me lean out too much towards the monitor in anticipation. Excellent and what is this competition going on? I think I have missed quiet a few things happening around here bcoz of eating too much BBJ. Need to check out what's going on at ZB's.Sakshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681787664386745577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7376829085082321753.post-35569280776228841722009-09-09T20:34:40.388+05:302009-09-09T20:34:40.388+05:30wow!!!
Though found it confusing in bits but over...wow!!!<br /><br />Though found it confusing in bits but over all loved the story!!!<br /><br />U maintained a suspense!!!<br /><br />Lovely, u shud now attempt more such stories!!!Smitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06342538308099137615noreply@blogger.com